by shybird
I don’t know why I’d question believability at this chapter. Maybe it all moved a bit too fast; two different characters, one complicit and the other so quick to fall in sync, all squeezed into his first meeting at uni. But I still love this story. The opening up of the back story about Dasha and her husband is a great development. I do wish you’d slowdown a bit. I think your readers are enjoying the ambiance of Russia and you could milk that out longer before Lyudmilla milked him. It’s still a five-star story to me.