All Comments on 'Rustling in the Library'

Sorry, but that entire story is flawed in plot, grammar - just about everything, really.

I appreciate feedback, what specifically was flawed about the plot? Also, I'm pretty careful with my grammar but I'm only human!

As a fellow British contributor to Lit I have occasionally been taken to task by American readers who see British idiom as incorrect English. I wonder if that's what the first, anonymous comment was getting at. Not that your story uses a lot of specifically British language either. Anyway - I liked it, found it sexy. Might have appreciated a slightly longer build-up to the actual sex (foreplay, if you like) but on the other hand there's nothing wrong with the occasional quickie, in both a sexual and literary sense. Thanks you, in any case, for a sexy little story.

Perfect length and oh so exciting. Keep them coming please.