by Pussyrider
too many inconsistancies in this one i.e if he had a huge lens then he wouldnt need to be "inches away from my pussy" and he couldnt throw the condom into darkness unless you lived about 3hrs from cardiff i know its only fantasy but the best fantasies are those that could be reality i enjoyed the 1st chapter but was dissapointed with this one
Yes, there are a few incosistensies...but, overall, it's a pretty good story. I do hope that you can do another in this series...you've done pretty good so far!!!
What a great follow up , loved it, it could be a real woman,
That was a hot well written very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.