All Comments on 'Rx: Love'

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I liked the way the characters were built up, how we learned who they were and what had happened to bring them to this point.

The eroticism was built slowly, just the way it should.

A lovely piece of work.

I hope there is more to come on this series, because it has a lot of potential!

DC:

You ain't lost nothing in the telling of this hot erotic tale. There will be a ch. 2, right? Thank You. Ronnie W.

WOW DC, you've done it again!!! Its a supurb story and its HOT. I sincerely hope there will be more chapters to it. Keep writing girl. You're the best.

Seems no topic is safe from you. You master them all.

Great work, as always, and i hope there is more ahead for these two.

The character development was superb. Extremely well written erotica. I hope you have a sequel planned for these lovely ladies.

Darlin', from start to finish, a wonderful read. Good character development, nice pacing, the scenes can be easily pictured and it flowed so nicely. The story demands a sequel - perhaps Amber and Bethany can go on one of those vacations that Amber mentions? That'd be hot, hot, HOT! My congrats on a wonderful piece of work.

Womanly luv between the races is my mania! Please continue this hot relationship.

great story til the end... can't call it real love when other people are added

Indeed huebie23. They both clearly agreed on the friends with benefits role at the end. This was clearly written for a male audience. The subplots about the d/s and Amber’s ex were unnecessary to the story. Lesbian sex, not lesbian love.