All Comments on 'Ryan Family Ch. 04'

Sorry but this killed the storyline for me.

And have you read the rest of the series? Everything that happens in this chapter is there for a reason.

I like whre the plot is going to take me!

the sister ruined the feel of the story. if she was so much of a bitch no way he would fuck her he would have been ignoring and avoiding her all along keep it believable. this chapter needs rewriting if the sister wanted to get the cousins together WHY didn't she do it BEFORE she fucked him? it would have made more sense and they would have been happier with her.