All Comments on 'Ryan is a Good Step-Son'

Very fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

I don’t usually do the step mom stories because they aren’t taboo enough for me but this one was hot.

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That was great! 5 Stars. Please keep going.

Congratulations Chris, I think this is your best work yet. I like that you have ventured away from the full-blown incest. I like this better and it’s far more believable. A few comments. When the stepmother first started hitting on Ryan, I felt that could have been softened. Instead of such crude language, she could have just offered a soft brush of her body, a slightly inappropriate placement of her hand, or a subtle “slip of a nip.” That usually gets the message across. Secondly, I felt her coming to Ryan’s room that first night was a little weird. Just after having unsatisfying sex with Brad, why would she put on a bra and panties? I would think a shorty nighty, or an open robe would have been more likely. And finally, I feel the ending still needs a little polishing. Too abrupt an ending for an otherwise very good story. But overall, I loved it – 5 stars. BTW – I’m still amused by your half British/half American grammar and spelling. Maybe a refresh of your profile would help. Don’t worry, I won’t tell you Mum.

Beautiful story, everyone gets horny but not everyone has the push to do something about it as the step mom did. I got a hint that Ryan's dad was sort of pushing him in the direction of his step mom and somehow knew it was her by asking her if she thought he'd be fucking her again.

Great story, but you need another chapter! 5 stars. Plaese continue!

Stepmoms can be hot too, especially if they are younger. Ryan's dad needs to go out of town for a funeral or something. Then Ryan can fuck his stepmom and she can be even louder and swear. "Fuck me Ryan, oh baby harder, I love your cock," without worrying about his dad hearing them. Plus, they could then fuck multiple times.