All Comments on 'Ryder Fox Rides The Train'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great photos and even better story, yet

you are so sexy in body as well as mind I can only hope for more from you.

Thank you, oh, great lingerie too. I think I have a new fetish. hmmm

n8Romanticn8Romanticover 3 years ago

Very sensual. I've been riding the wrong train!

FrivolousFrivolousover 3 years ago
Great as always

Everything written by this author is awesome, especially anything about Jack Grierson.

Huge fan of Jack Grierson.

maddictmaddictover 3 years ago

Great story, I was on the Friday train and this couple were phughing right next to me, she really let loose the second time she came. OH Ms. You dropped you panties. You never turned aroumd. You look good in your picture s, I couldn't really see you then, you felt good. Your husband is a stud

Dusu68Dusu68over 3 years ago
More selfie’s please!

Another very erotic story from your fertile imagination, made even better by the selfies of your sexy body. I liked that you constructed a storyline that builds to the erotic climax and you didn’t just pen a run-of-the mill stroke story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Beautiful

Absolutely beautiful photos. Thank you for sharing something so lovely.

MedicalpeteMedicalpeteover 3 years ago

Cleaver! Very cleaver. Great little yarn with excellent photos. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More, please !

I wanna know how you surreptitiously blow him on the commuter train !

MsLingerieMsLingerieover 3 years ago
Xciting

Been on the wrong train myself....on the lookout now

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Aye god. Two fives and one to grow on. Wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Thanks

Welcome back, enjoyed the new read

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Nice little tale, and you’re lovely. Thanks

WanttobefemmeWanttobefemmeover 3 years ago

Mixed feelings about this story...but definitely hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This was assuredly familiar to any commuter

You successfully wove the story into a believable notion, the story developed heat as it progressed, as I for one, have found myself in similar conditions trying to not to grow a hard on. Its impossible not to when the fantasy takes hold, there are no amounts of condescension to bail me out of it, lol! Thanks for your take on it, I certainly enjoyed your version!

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStoneabout 3 years ago
Well written. Too rapey for my tastes.

Nonconsent is a big turn off for me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great story and lovely pictures. You have an incredible ass.

Hope it gets properly spanked soon :)

dingusmcmingusdingusmcmingusabout 3 years ago

This is an excellent variation on a well-known theme. I look forward to checking out your others stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Ryder Fox will ride hard on somebody's hard cock as the train bumps the tracks to help drive a hard cock up a very wet pussy like a pile driver!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please list your other sites were I can find your stories! I love your stories!

MajorRewriteMajorRewriteover 2 years ago

Your Jack Grierson series is a riot. I like how he knocks up all the girls. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story and great body. You should make it a thing where Jack is so used to having sex, he gets a headache if he doesn't have sex every day. Also you should have Jack hire a snoop to take pics of the women he has bred with their husbands, and have him play a sideshow of the pics while Farah gives him head. The pics will serve as a reminder to Jack his superiority over those men, and remind him of all of his conquests and the fruit they bear, underscoring his fertility. I think Jack would like that.

JGnCTJGnCTover 1 year ago

Where is the follow up?

LovetofuckwivesLovetofuckwives3 months ago

Ahhh yes. Now she needs to get cuckold into chastity and panties. She needs to be able to trust him. Because he will find out.

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I write because I enjoy it. I've been weaving erotic stories since I was a teenager - first with my sister, then by myself. I have published my stories on a variety of sites. I'm always looking to improve. So send me your feedback! My Jack Grierson series of stories is a bod...