by Aimie2469
I only wish I could write with your fluidity. Though I prefer a bit more plot, your skill carried the story nicely. It was so sweet. It could use a few commas and the great artist was Michelangelo, one word, but that critique, those quibbles, just show how jealousy can cloud ones mind. Thank you
Thank you for the constructive comment. I am only glad that you enjoyed it! As to Michelangelo... "Just a slip off the finger, seems to happen to me quite often!"
Aimie, this is nice. I enjoyed the read. Although, I don't know how realistic it is to move in with someone, perhaps even to a different country with them after one fuck. Herein, lies the irony, it's not realistic its fictional. I would love to read more.