All Comments on 'SA E03B: A Night of Discovery'

Telling a story in the lesbian section from a male's point of view is very unpopular and unwanted. I've read literally thousands of stories in this section, in alphabetical order, and there are only a few stories told from a man's point of view. You almost lost me from the first page when I realized that the narrator was male. Those of us who are actual lesbians don't want males sexually involved in the action at all. This is not a bisexual section; no straight sex wanted or needed. This story should be in Group Sex.

I did enjoy reading this although I got mixed up on the flash backs at first. Sean is quite a man. I have never had any man able to come twice.

I didn't get past about three paragraphs, "They are" is not "There" and spelling it that way is confusing to literate readers. Punctuation, as well as spelling, seems to be unknown territory to you. You write like a poorly-educated 12-year-old.