All Comments on 'Sabrina's Debt'

by LandscapebyNight

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Didn't care for Dad's treatment of her.

It was way too far away from the character that had been built and you have us no reason to want to see the sweet girl severely abused by her father. It was far too violent and out of character. Also, we have zero content explaining what happened, why the father acted that way, what Sabrina was actually up to and for how long. Juat Didn't track or wrap up well imo. I had high hopes based on your story development. The inconsistencies in the end, plus the different reactions to the same situations from different girls was unbelievable as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Ditto

Gotta agree with the previous caller. I thought the buildup was great. I liked the premise. But the ending was inconsistent, and too many loose ends. What was Sabrina's new deal? What was Caitlin's part? Just very inconsistent. Now, if you continue this with further explanations, maybe it will rate a higher number.

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