by MaryAnderson
It was a nice story. The only thing wrong was that you had too many characters to keep track of and it showed a couple of times. Otherwise it was a very sweet story with good descriptive imagery.
every story of yours are well written and have interesting storylines. and they are all sexy. as is this one. but, this one just didn't work for me, however. a little too "out-there".
Brilliant combination of genres! Fantasy/Anthro./Theology/Incest intertwined for a meaningful opening - body - conclusion. Well Done!
JimInIndy
This story is REALLY confusing. And the sex all sounds very clinical. Mechanically right but pleasure reads like an afterthought.
From the point of view of this researcher/documentary maker of "strange" happenings and places... BRILLIANT! Quite moving in places, and from various readings of mysterious places, set in the right location. Thank you.
Just read this for the second time. Found it again by accident. STILL BRILLIANT! What a lovely family too. May the Spirit keep them happy!
The only other thing that I can do is score this in an incredible tale of family love and lust.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
And I'd give it 6*s if I could. I love your writing style, concise prose and descriptions. Will be reading more.
As mentioned, 'nice' but confusing, with character slippage and sloppy orthography. An assiduous editor would really have helped.
Good job, thanks for sharing your work. Lots of people made it difficult for this old man to keep them fresh in his mind. Still it was an unusual story. First 5* story for me in quite a while.