All Comments on 'Sacred Glen'

by MaryAnderson

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice story.

It was a nice story. The only thing wrong was that you had too many characters to keep track of and it showed a couple of times. Otherwise it was a very sweet story with good descriptive imagery.

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
i gave it 5 stars

every story of yours are well written and have interesting storylines. and they are all sexy. as is this one. but, this one just didn't work for me, however. a little too "out-there".

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
"Nice"? Remarkable!

Brilliant combination of genres! Fantasy/Anthro./Theology/Incest intertwined for a meaningful opening - body - conclusion. Well Done!

JimInIndy

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Agree with Anonymous #1, Nice but confusing

This story is REALLY confusing. And the sex all sounds very clinical. Mechanically right but pleasure reads like an afterthought.

Vix_GiovanniVix_Giovanniover 5 years ago
Fecund story

A great oneshot, what a treat!

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 5 years ago
Awesome!!

Incredible story. Please keep writing!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Possibly more than 5*!

From the point of view of this researcher/documentary maker of "strange" happenings and places... BRILLIANT! Quite moving in places, and from various readings of mysterious places, set in the right location. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Still 10*

Just read this for the second time. Found it again by accident. STILL BRILLIANT! What a lovely family too. May the Spirit keep them happy!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Utterly amazing writing.

The only other thing that I can do is score this in an incredible tale of family love and lust.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
5*

And I'd give it 6*s if I could. I love your writing style, concise prose and descriptions. Will be reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Praise

Outstanding story. Beautiful underlying love story!

Antryg_WindroseAntryg_Windroseabout 3 years ago

As mentioned, 'nice' but confusing, with character slippage and sloppy orthography. An assiduous editor would really have helped.

blackknight314blackknight314almost 2 years ago

Good job, thanks for sharing your work. Lots of people made it difficult for this old man to keep them fresh in his mind. Still it was an unusual story. First 5* story for me in quite a while.

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