All Comments on 'Sacrifice'

by SunsetHues

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Anonymousover 6 years ago

Good Fap. Or rap. Tippity Tap? Is it that? Or the format? Cant tell? Well. I gave you 3 from me, so you can cree around(or tell your family you need to "pee.")

So you see, I am me, and you are you. So fap, if you want to. For I am speaking. In. Short. Sentences. For. It. Is. Art. Like this story, like your story, and like mine..... You know what we have in common reader? You are as batshit crazy as I.

No, I am not done, I have only begun! If this crappy rap must go on, so it shall, like my friend Mal once said "If I get another fucking notice from the FBI for watching xxx.bestiality.horsedragondogcatelephantdonkeyshreksnekmemesporn.com I will blow my brains out." God rest his soul... So, if you dont mind me if 404 will load I will continue to fap

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... Yes! IT LOADED, so I shall blow that load that I have been holding for these mystifying memes

Sincerely, Mr. Snek

SunsetHues almost 7 years agoAuthor

Really?

Are you really saying you rated the story 1 star because it was from a female perspective? Seriously? I try to ignore negative comments but that's a bit much.

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

Poorly done on pronouns

yeah you get 1 star. I thought it was very nice but I could not stay with it because I am not female. Changing this perspective slightly would have mad this good but no not so to me right now.

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

Dragon Heaven

I'm absolutely in love with dragons... especially ruby fire dragons. I actually felt like I was one of them ravaging this woman. Had to go touch myself with this one... and still worked up after this one. Great job!

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