All Comments on 'Sacrifice Ch. 07'

can you tell us at least if you are planning on writing another chapter because its nearly been two years since the last and I am about to give up (like a lot of people).

Please come back and finish your amazing story. I come back a couple of months to see if you have uploaded another chapter sadly you haven't. Not sure if I should quit checking back but some how I don't think I can. I hate to read a great story and not have the ending so please finish. This story is far more than great or fantastic.

I read all chapters in one sitting and I have to say., it really kept me interested! Loved every scene, and the characters! cant wait for the next!

I love this story and it has to be one of the most well-written that I have read on here. The characters are well developed and engaging - very easy to relate to and feel for in an emotional sense. The sex scenes are perfect and I appreciate the way that they just roll along naturally through the story. They are not rushed and don't feel forced, which gives them this wonderfully organic quality. Ironically enough, however, I find the underlying story and non-sexual bits to be even more interesting and far easier to become completely engrossed in than any other part of the story. Considering the type of fare that one normally finds on this site, it is QUITE a breath of fresh air.

Wonderfully written story. :)

Oh please write more!?! I have never been so engrossed in story of this kind. You are an amazing writer and this story is the most intriguing bit of work. Your characters are engaging, frustrating, and 100% believable. And that's saying something given the leading male is a mythical beast! You simply have to write more. It would be a crime not to.

I don't think I've ever left a review on this site, but I just wanted to say that this story is superbly written and wonderfully entertaining. I've loved reading it and I truly look forward to reading more!

This one of the BEST,,,, can not wait for the remainder

This is my fourth time reading Sacrifice. Everytime I read it I fall more and more in love with it. I love the new chapter and can't wait for more. Thank you for writing so beautifully. This story is enchanting.

Read all seven chapters in one night. Please finish this, please.....

please...please...please...finish the story.

I just found this entire story and am enchanted. I'd like to add my own request to those who want to read more.

You write so beautifully.

Please give us an ending. This has really been such an awesome tale and I have become very attached to the main characters and cannot bear to not know their fate.

I'll keep checking until the next section is ready. I good story is worth the wait.

Loved your writing,but to come this far and be left hanging,come on,please finish this story,it has been awhile,really really looking forward to more.PLEASE.

update soon please i love this story and i love how u use the different greek myths in cluding the one with lady naga, i think shes off the east indian myth right? anyway update soon please?

I was so intent on following the entire story that I may have forgotten to vote for some of the Chapters. I'm sorry about that!

I'll get to them soon, though, as I will be coming back regularly to see if you have been back to add anything more.

Every once in awhile I come across a completely surprising piece of writing that I had not expected to enjoy so much, and yet found myself unable and unwilling to put down. Astonishingly I found this with your "Sacrifice". It held me enthralled til the last word written. (I was reading this story on my laptop when I was able, then when I had to get to my meetings I was on my tablet between appointments, and then my phone, lol. I'm telling you, I was totally engrossed in this tale.

Most times stories leave me feeling fulfilled in some way. Maybe it made me angry or thoughtful or even sad or happy, disgruntled or irritated, or perhaps the characters made me want to strangle and kill them lol or even more rarely a story will leave me so completely satisfied and yet still yearning for more. Honestly, "Sacrifice" did this for me. Totally unexpected but very much appreciated.

What is comes down to is that for any story to have any lasting impression on me it would have had to evoke strong emotions and emotional investment from me throughout its entirely. And "Sacrifice" did just that. Shocking to me really because I I really did not expect that from a posted story here on Literotica. Snobbish and stereotypical of me but true, nonetheless. (I am sharing this so you know how much I value your work and not because I am maligning anyone here.) I will remember this tale long after I have read hundreds of other works and forgotten them, too, because the weaving of the tale, worlds and characters involved and their development captivated my imagination and emotions. I Loved it immensely!.

I know you have mentioned how short on time and tight your schedule is, but this tale and world deserves to be expanded on and Calliope and Thelios' story continued, so I am going to add my voice to the many others who have entreated you for "More!More!More!"

I could go on and on, but I won't and instead will add one last thought:

When a very gifted writer comes along and opens up a brand new world for us to explore we as visitors to that world cannot help but be selfish and demanding for more opportunities, and any excuse, to revisit that world. We are overwhelmed with excited expectation of more captivating moments that transport us away from our own realities and which we stingily steal and hoard just for ourselves. Kind of like I do with rich, smooth and silky dark chocolate. =)

Thank you, and please keep writing and bring us back to Calliope and Thelios' world.

Please write more!

Just reread this story; I love it so much! Please give us another chapter! I hope you find the time / decide to continue and finish. :)

I really really like this. Keep writing i'm waiting for the next instalment and yes life, work etc does get in the way sometimes but you came back.

Please more. I love this story.

Thank you. Just marvelous.

Updattteeeeeee!! Please? Where are you?

...let us know if you plan on finishing! I've reread this story so many times, and I'm always keeping an eye out for a new chapter. It's so good!

Miss your fuzzy, red slippers, Uncle P. Hope all is well with you.

~m~

He muttered "It isn't his?" Either i'm completely interpreting semi-subtle hints the wrong way, or WHATTT?? That isn't possible... right? Wait? WAHHH and there's no chapter 8!! PLEASEEEE!!! I must know.

yes love this story!! stayed up till 7 am reading it!! pls have an ending soon!!

Please don't let this story just wither and die, it deserves to be finished!

Why don't you quit your day job you have real talent .....wow I love the story I can't wait to read more ...........I love the romance in it ! I hope they declare their love and get married

Stephen J

I can't wait to see what happens next. What's not his? What was Phineas talking about? Is Demetri ok? When will Thelios and Calliope admit they love each other? Such a passionate story, The love making keeps getting Hotter, just making the story even better. BEST story I've read in a long time! I can't wait till your able to add the next chapter !

OMG I have a personal library and this is one of the best stories I have ever read and I read alot!!!!!! I read this all in one night!!! I so hope that you will continue this story so much this can not be the end!! I look forward to reading more!

I stumbled into this series a few hours ago and have not been able to stop from hungrily reading every line like a starved child! Please continue! You write beautifully and I can't wait for more!!

and also check your 'enithermon ' acount and though you have not updated, I know you'll be back ,you love us

and we love your stories.

This is by far the best story I have read on this site. Book worthy. Looking forward to more chapters!!

Need next chapter!!!

I read everything written in 2 days. I couldn't stop reading. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter !

If you look at the time between the previous posts it is not unreasonable to assume that he is still working on the story and even if it is left half finished (which would be a great shame) it's been a wonderful tale so far.

I hope what ever has taken your time and mind of this wonderful tale will resolve itself and that now that it is 2013 where I am, we will finally get to read the rest of this story. It would indeed be a great pity if it was left unfinished as most of the hundreds of comments have stated we want more! So please come back and finish this!

Your avid fan

Willie

Ah, it's sad, really, to see such a great series die like this...

It is, by far, yet another Gem amongst the dung and rubble. And it is one, as well: it is a Gemini Story (One that is yet to gain the amount of popularity it deserves, is well written, and is able to draw emotions other than just the one directed at the audience)

Damn Good Job.

i dont think the author is coming back....

Where's the rest of the story? I'm hooked and now left wanting.....please finish this story.

please! what's the ending?

i thought for sure there'd be a new chapter posted by christmastime but still none *cries*...no...*bawls my eyes out*...

I do hope you are well it has been so long since we have heard from you! So please update your bio if not this beautiful story yet,let us know you are ok. I hope that sometime in the next year you will be able to finish this tale!

Thanking you for all the wonderful chapters you have already posted and that I have read many times.

I am so happy with everything in this story. I could try to give a critique or something of the like, but I'm still too caught up with how much I enjoyed reading it. I sincerely hope that you find the time and desire to complete Sacrifice-- or update, anyway-- although I can't complain. Some of my stories are going on 5 + years without an update, so I don't have room to talk. But, that being said, you have a wonderful thing going here, and I would hate to see it fall into the oblivion of unfinished stories. I wish you the best of luck and marvelous bouts of inspiration.

Amazing

story!!! Hope you find time to continue it!!

Okay Dude, it's been over a year. that is way tooo long to leave us on a knifes edge. don't keep us in limbo any longer. POST.

I wish I never read this story as I am now very frustrated over when you will write the next chapter. I expect that by the time you do write it I will have forgotten about this amazing story :( . Please continue to write as soon as possible I do not wish to forget about Thelios or calliope.

Hope you're still with us and working on the next chapter :)

I read all seven chapters today and I am literally becoming obsessed with your writing, and this story.

Please tell us you're going to continue with it?? *anxiously awaiting the next chapter even though u havn't updated in many (many) months*

I've been checking your page regularly for the next chapter, please write more soon this is my favourite story on Literotica!

I really love this story, please don't leave us hanging!!!

please write more!!!

please write more. its killing me. i loved the story i really would love to have more of this

Please come back!

Okay you've got to finish this! You're killin me over here!!

i really got into this, pleasseee write more soon. i loved this story, i need to know how this ends. thank you for the wonderful story keep writing :D

amazing

This is a good story and has a lot of potential for depth. Can't wait to read more.

One of the best stories I've read here. Please continue it!

Fingers crossed that you'll one day pick this amazing story back up. It's really amazing. :)

please....

Still waiting patiently for the next installment.

Thelios .. how much was he alone. I miss something .. inhuman in him .. like if he was about to intimately hurt her .. not much .. a little. How could he awaken again his .. "human" feelings .. compassion .. love... whowing that .. in shame at start maby ?. More emotions ... more feelings :) Story is VERY good .. but if u would consider streinghtening the main characters ... the most bad and the most good sides .. i think it would be stil better :)

Waiting inpatiently for more :)

Please update I enjoy reading this

damn, dragons really do it for me! ;) please, please PLEASE write more!!

A brilliant bit of writing! Couldn't stop reading. Hooked.

I would even buy this as a novel.

This story is great, what an amazing imagination you have. Please don't give up, I'm completely hooked.

please finish the story, i hardly ever read stories from this category. but this story has me hooked, love all the characters. write soon!! stop waiting a year to write

You piece of shit. You've taken a year long hiatus and I am sick of waiting for you to get yourself together. WRITE ME MOARRRRRRR. NAAAOOOOWW. Please and thank you, I'm in love with you and your stories. It would make me amazingly happy if you came back to literotica to satisfy my curiosity and need for this story to be finished. <3 <3 <3

Please....chapter 8 soon!

Love your stories!

This story was terrific. The adventures and characters are very well written and keep the reader entertained. Please keep writing, looking forward to what comes next. Would of gladly bought this a book.

What an excellent series!

I would have been happy to pay money to read this in paperback form, your talent is delightful. Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Now I know it's pathetic to beg for what is essentially a nonfiction storyline, but you've been given the talent to make stories really addictive despite some misspelled words (Sorry; it had to be said). So please, for the love of whatever writing god, just post the rest of this story already and give me something else to whine about!!! Oh, by the way, I'm a big fan of this series. Keep up the good work! ;p

I'm heart broken. Please finish this amazing story!

This is better by far than most published romances I've read.

Why isn't well written adventure -edification a thriving genre?

I am a huge fan, and I hope you update soon!

We all know you are busy and if any one can appreciate that, it's me. But please, even if it's just a page, GIVE US SOMETHING!!! it doesn't need to be long, but I think i speak for all of your fans when I say we need a fix!

Please wrote more

its been nearly a year!!! please update !!

Please tell me that this isn't the last submission of the story? If it is I'd have to say I'm highly disappointed. I wanna know if Calliope ever tells Thelios she loves him and if he tells her the same. What happened to Dimitri? I know he was on the other boat and that it too was attacked but they should know if hes dead or not. He was one of my favorite characters. I also just realized how much I love love stories and I'm surprised I have fallen for a story written by a guy, no offense of course. Anywho don't let this be a cliff hanger ending those suck unless you plan on doing a sequel story.

Have to say ive read a lot of stories on here and i agree with a previous post, i wasnt always reading for the steamy sex bits, please continue when ever u can, i will be checking back in regularly :)

This was the first story I read on here and I was absolutely hooked. I loved it so much! It came to a point where I wasn't even reading it for the (wonderfully steamy) sex scenes haha, but just for the characters. I need to know what happens next!

This story has me completely hooked - you are a very talented writer. I check back so often to see if you have another chapter ready... one of these days! I know life comes first, though, so I'm sending happy thoughts (filled with free time) your way :)

This is one of my favorite stories, finished or not -- just letting you know :-)

I am truly in love with your story and I really look forward to seeing how the rest of the story plays out! Please continue, I'll be waiting! :)

Please, Pandarus,let us know that you're not dead!

Recently completing my own dissertation I understand the demands. But you don't have to give us 8 pages all at once. Just start posting a little at a time to keep us happy. Pretty pretty please with sugar on top??? :)

I do truly understand that you have a great many things to think of. I don't mean to pressure you unduly, but could you please, please get Calliope to land, at least? It's awfully cold and dark out there on the open sea, and she does have a little one to think of.

This is a genuinely great story, full of rich depth and character development. I can only add my voice to the many offering you encouragement and appreciation. Please, Uncle P, give us a bone!

I am patient ... but please don't make us wait too long! This is such a marvelous tale, the characters, especially Calliope, so enthralling, the writing so fine (okay, other than some mechanical errors that could be edited out) that I am panting for another installment. I truly hope the author's workload permits a continuation of the story.

Please write more, Uncle P. I really love this story. I will check every day for the new submission.

We don't need ten more chapters, we just need one with a happy ending!

Please hurry back to us and satisfy the aching need to know more of Thelios and Colliape.

Please, I'm begging you, right more! Best story I think I might have ever read!

Great story,such a shame there is no ending,it was such a wonderful read,hope you make iit back to finish this,hate to see a story with no ending,sucks for the reader also.

I need to find me a Thelios :)

Sad day! This is my favorite series on here!

Thoroughly entertaining! I hope things go well so you will get back to finishing this story and writing more.

Hope there is more soon, I enjoy all aspects of this story...thank you

Your writing's as good as published paranormal romance writers! If you can work out a solid world/universe based around this (in-progress) novella, I really think you could get published. How about finishing this up and getting a good agent to look at it, as well as all the fan comments here? (yes yes, I have the ulterior motive of trying to get more chapters out of you! *laugh*) But seriously, do consider getting a professional to look at your work. Good luck and know that you have many fans waiting breathlessly for the next update!