by MTDesign
the spanking killed the story it is to easy for one or both to get mad or hurt and end up hating each other keep it loving or put it in the nonconsent or nonerotic areas
Not a bad read, but they should have gone all the way.......LAROC
Hell, I read all of that and nobody even got laid! Argh! I want my time back!
whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why did you end it there?!?!
I actually loved the story. I'm not a huge fan of incest, but this story was written with loving tenderness, and the slow sure build up that I believe would be necessary for two family members to travel down that road. I had no problem with ending where you did, always leave them wanting more. As a fellow writer I understand that.