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KinPAKinPAover 4 years ago
Overall good...except for one thing...

The story was overall pretty good, but it could have been better had it not been written in present tense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Soothing

Great flow

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Good story and pacing, but with inconsistency. How old is she, 19 or 24?

Rancher46Rancher46about 2 years ago

Great short story. 4 stars

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Free-lance writer who enjoys reading mostly non-fiction but also Nicholas Sparks romance novels and "serious" lit (John Updike, Irwin Shaw, Philip Roth, Herman Wouk). I enjoy writing these stories because it entertains me as well as the readership. Lit is unique in that wri...