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by Cromagnonman

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wapentakewapentakeover 2 years ago

Another excellent story. Long may you continue catching the bad men, and winning fair maid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Bloody good!

KinPAKinPAabout 2 years ago

-1 Star for not indicating who is talking in any extended dialog

-1 Star for what felt like scope creep in both the story and character backgrounds.

-1 Star for expecting the reader to know specific terms without explanation.

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I'm a pretty normal average male, chronologically well over 18 but psychologically I'm not so sure. I have been writing as a hobby for many years and now that I have time on my hands I am looking to become more professional at it. I enjoy reading, morning walks along the river...