by frederickson866
You must live in the Great Lakes region... next time I see a yacht I will smile....
Love the series of sailing stories. Combines my love of sailing and erotica. Please keep them coming!
So when is Jennifer's story available ... it's listed as more of the series. I like this type of series ... just long enough to grab your interest and provide a good enjoyable read. Thanks.
Several missing apostrophes and other writing errors. Your overall writing is better than most but you can fix a few things. For me, this one wasn’t as good as the previous one.
This is a great little feel-good tale. Sure there are a few typos but who cares as long a the main sheet keeps taut?
I agree with anonymous. The last one was better. But I really enjoyed the anti-drug and anti-smoking message that was secondary to the plot. But the whole "getting permission to date the step-niece" thing was kind of misplaced since the girl was 19 already. 4/5
Bob the fool marries a woman with 3 daughters.....must be shortage of marriageable women out there