by AishaMuhammad
This is why the Indian subcontinent has been subjugated for centuries .
A whole race of Pussy men , if one could even call them that pronoun , bend the knee to numerically inferior numbers , because they all have a sub mindset when it comes to their women .
I'm just hoping those mustache's are soon bred out of those " ugly" gals .
Interesting. The author herself has two of the most revered names in Islamic history, and yet writes a story in which the female protagonist is a muslimah and the male is a Hindu--not a good or safe combination. The husband's name (Altaf) might mean "kindness" or "gentleness." Is it significant that this Muslim author tells a story in which the cuckolded Muslim husband is humiliated by her Hindu lover?
Her falling for Chaudary is a bit quick IMO for a story. It would make the story better if there was more mental angst and we see her will slowly crumbling. But, if this is autobiographical, as implied, then the way she “fell” is the way she fell.
Don’t know if in the Islamic wedding there is swearing of fidelity as they do in Christian weddings, but she fell pretty easily into becoming a nasty ass slut. If I were Altaf I’d say good riddance and leave the slut. And tell the family she was barren so he threw her at the landlord to pay for the rent, as that was what she was worth as a wife. Then move back home. That would save his external dignity and ameliorate some internal dignity.
Not my type of story, obviously, but a good first effort. For encouragement to a beginner — 4-stars.
Great story, great timing. Please ignore the haters and continue to write. By the way, I prefer stories where everyone is happy, there is reclaiming of the wife, but you are the author.
I approve of this story.. because whether or not there's love, certainly there's no hate. But there is lust. Don't understand why haters think Muslim women don't have lust?
What is this motivation to belittle religion in this story?? Whether Hindu or Muslim…or black or white…I find it very demeaning and obnoxious when someone thrives on this sort of storyline!! Disgustingly pathetic!!
The idiots, also called cuckolds, don't die out. And neither do their fans. A pity!
Sure...it could happen this way. God damn this is stupid shit.
Fuck off with this nonsense. Allah hates you for this.
What is wrong with men from India? It's like this is the only kind of story you people submit. What a bunch of pussies. 2 stars because it's total crap. Stupid crap, at that.