by qoo123
Woo-hoo! Finally got around to posting one of my stories here. I've more to upload that are already written and available elsewhere, so keep an eye out for them.
Regards,
qoo123
International Owl Of Mystery
I'm sorry but why the fuck would someone have the phone number for his bully in his contacts? Usually it's trying to keep contact to a minimum. I've been out of school for over a decade but things shouldn't have changed much.
Impreg and breeding? Check.
Fun characterization? Check.
Good descriptions and use of anthro anatomy? Check.
Honestly this was a fun read. Very sexy, and utilizes the anthro elements well without going over the top with it. Writers doing furry stories tend to go overboard a lot, cramming as many fetishes and obscure details into one story as they can. You've avoided that, much to the benefit of the story.
I look forward to what you come up with in the future. I'm sure there are more specimens at the ARC to explore or in need of breeding after all.
Was an engaging read and I really hope you decide to make a sequel or
Even a series.
For any interested readers, the sequel to this story is now published. Search for 'Salamander MILF'.
qoo123
International Owl Of Mystery
In this part Trace is clearly identified as a Salamander Hybrid,but for the sub-category is she classified as a shemale since she used to be a male,but in this form she is able to get pregnant.Or is she considered a Full Female Salamander?.
Chris seeming to be somewhat young (maybe 19 or 20) in college seems poorly responsible to be the father of all those babies when their born.So does Trace tell her kids that Chris is their Dad and hope they can form a bond with a Human Dad and Salamander Hybrid Children?
Also what about Trace and Chris's relationship,do they become a true family where they get married and have more offspring.I wish the author had included those details in the stories.But overall this was a pretty enjoyable read.