Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'Sally and Roberta'

by Davidrobertson

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 3 Comments
IntercontinentalIntercontinentalover 15 years ago
Routine

A bit cliched I am afraid, and the "storm will break in about an hour ...513 words" was corny.

The storm/ surging/ stormy imagery was a bit crass,but the charecterisation was ok.Was too obviously a mans take on a lesbian relationship too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Wonderful first story.

I loved reading your story. It was very good for a first story. Please write again soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Not Bad

Not bad, for a guy. Not bad at all.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login