All Comments on 'Sally turned Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Please Continue

This is such a good start to a series. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Definitely need to continue

This is a great beginning!

The_WatermanThe_Watermanover 4 years ago
Yes!

Yes! and Yes! More please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great erotica

Some of the best erotica I’ve ever read

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Absolutely brilliant

The reality of it all is absolutely astounding, you handled the personal dilemma of this kind of sexual contract in today’s society so well, seamless and completely plausible.

It’s not an easy thing to overcome but you made it look effortless.

Really looking forward to reading more.

Tess (UK)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Incredibly Well Done

Exceptionally well-crafted! The development of emotions, characters and events is very believable and enthralling.

greybishopgreybishopabout 4 years ago
Nice Beginning To An Interesting Tale

Very well written story with an interesting premise. The author's decision to have Sally's initial submission be to Sir James was a great choice and played out quite nicely. I gave it five stars and look forward to the further installments.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

You are genius.

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