All Comments on 'Salorean Room Service'

A very good story - great concept and decent execution. If you think about it a bit more deeply, she should have just pretended to put her name in, like the other rich and powerful, or purpose-bred clones for the job, but they story is engrossing enough that you don't think about it too deeply. There's also a bit too much emphasis on nanites - it takes the humanity out of the situation - suffering, repressed masochistic tendencies, personal sexual awakening, etc, all of those interesting ideas get swept under "nanites make horny". Author should probably add the "lottery" story tag. 5/5

This is so well written omg props to you for the detail and the descent. Good worldbuilding too.

I loved this story. IMO, this is the way I like reluctance to be depicted — she’s not actually hurt, she’s used and she loves it. I like the nanites, that they cover up what would otherwise be painful, and that they help her handle all the sex she otherwise wouldn’t be able to… for me it makes it more palatable as some other stories are too harsh for me. Extra credit for warnings, always a fan of authors who put them. My one critique would be to spend a little more time on the sex acts — sometimes it would be over too quickly and on to the next thing. The multiple characters also helped balance the sweet + dominant lover traits, which I love both of but authors tend to only go with one or the other 100 stars. Thank you