All Comments on 'Sam'

your relatively pedantic now. Its as if your trying to write like a 6 year trying to make a Saturday morning super hero cartoon based on He Man

get back to lost empire and stop the weird ninja shit

This story has extremely good potential, please keep going.

Glad to see this story on this site, it's so difficult to find the chapters in the correct order on the other site even using the search (it doesn't work at all well). Your stories are to good to be messed up with like that so looking forward to more of yours on this site.

Yo yo yo I likes the story my friend pls don't stop

Nice to find more of your work pars, but it would be awesome if you could do more of lost empire. I just got bored trying to find another great story to read when I happened upon this one. Did not realize it was yours until I was done reading the first chapter. Oh don’t gat me wrong, I am going to read it all especially now that I know that you are the one who wrote it. Keep on keeping on.

I agree with both the lovers and the haters of your work, it has some problems, and like the Saturday morning cartoon reference it it somewhat juvenile. However you do have a way above average creative imagination and you tales a a fun read, please do not listen to the haters, and do please keep gifting us with your stories, I really enjoy them, thank you! TTFN

Love your work!!! Super Heroes are a guilty pleasure of mine, maybe not so guilty!!!

Seriously OP protagonist...

Not a good story. AAA++