All Comments on 'Sam and Edward Ch. 01'

Is there going to be a part 2?

Interesting story... Are you going to continue it?

If you do, please have someone do a basic grammar check for you.

NEW = not old. KNEW = was aware.

YOUR = belonging to you. YOU'RE = you are.

Honest, it makes a difference. Good luck with your writing.

. . . not required for a great continuing story. A little stretch beyond is exciting. If this is going to be a four week affair I hope it will be told well with detailed anticipation and realization by all parties. It is a good start with this chapter.

Great story! I hope you write a part 2!

You wrote a very nice story. I enjoyed the fact that Sam started out using condoms but decided to go bareback. The sex scenes were just long enough to be hot. The fact that Sam could be pregnant by Edward enhanced the story. Personally I think all white women should have at least one black baby.

Great story!!! Congrats!

great story, can't wait to see chapter 2. The New Neighbours and The Ambassador are two of my favorite stories. Would love to see a next chapter to both of those too !

ever actual finish a story??????

Really excited for part 2

Please find the time and motivation to write part 2 and maybe more. Come on ... you can do it :).

great story!! continue writing please!!

I have read most of your stories but found 2 that were of my liking and taste the new neighbors and Sam and Edward but they ended unfinished. please at least try 2 write more chapters of these two.

Could you write more chapters of new neighbors and Sam and Edward?

I am sure that the more we have exposure to creative minds like yours more of us will be intoxicated with lust and fantasy. I am confident that most get so stimulated by

such a beautiful and hot story that masturbation and or more sexual freedom and pleasure will be enjoyed by more folks. Thank you for sharing your lust with others

Congratulations!!!

Hot story my wife loved it

This series is so hot that I can't get enough! I just adore it! Going to have to make it a regular read from now on. I hope to get more soon!

Thank you and cheers!

I don't understand the desire to share your wife With another man. However the story was very hot Hot. Solid 5

A. Run of the mill story, different scenario, same story. Not sensual or erotic, disappointing really. So sorry to be critical, I know you have tried your best, perhaps your other stories are better, I will read one on a different theme and let you know. Perhaps it's me, I have probably read to many of that type, perhaps I have grown tired of them and that's the reason for my lack of arousal.

Every now and then RON gets mentioned. At first I thought husband's name - since it was never mentioned - but that doesn't work either. Just adds to the confusion. Get potential - good build up - but then .... very little. And there is more chapters - wonder if I should bother

Who is Ron? Who is Kim? You need to keep the names straight and at points I wonder if this story wasn't stolen and you just changed the names.

That said, if you clean it up, it's pretty good.

Always enjoy a hotwife story even if the names are mixed up. But in principle its very erotic to share your wife on vacation as I have done many times

Black Baby is the hottest thing to fantasize. Now I will have to read more! 5 stars