All Comments on 'Sam and Jake Pt. 03'

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49WIZARD8849WIZARD88almost 4 years ago
Gets Better

I'm really enjoying this series!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
wonderful

we def need Sam to get preg.

KlitomaticKlitomaticalmost 4 years ago
Yesssss

You are doing well. Lots of possibilities with this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
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Sam needs to be taken in the marriage bed.

The dad needs to move to spare room and Sam and Jake have the master bedroom Where he takes possession of Sam completely.. bareback all day

Pregnancy a possibility in the future

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 4 years ago

Love the series! I think that Jake needs to move into the master bedroom since he now can openly be with Sam. Five stars and a favorite point!

HragsHragsalmost 4 years ago
We need more chapters..... ASAP

Now that they can act like man and wife , Dad needs to move into sons room with them in master bedroom . Dad will have to accept like the Charlie Rich songs " What goes on behind closed doors".

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcalmost 4 years ago

Well written but the plot has left the rails of reality. Would have been better for the father to not know what was going on and say he was leaving for the other woman.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
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Just when we think things are going to slow down you give us a great twist , I was honestly thinking dad was having an affair and now that he knows about mom n son I agree with everyone else that Jake needs to be moved into the master bedroom and sad go to his old room . I know alot of ppl believe an incestuous baby will have health issues the risk is actually very low unless it has been happening continuously for a few generations and I'll argue with anyone on this as I have living proof to back me . My oldest son is from who I thought for years was my cousin but found out when we admitted to our parents that I was the dad if my cousins baby to be that my cousin is actually my half sister. My dad n my moms younger sister enjoyed having sex as she lived with my parents while my uncle was stationed over seas for most if his 20 yr military career

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Lust, not love

Well written...so well done I expect more out of these characters than I would from a lessor story and author.

Mom is in lust. So is the son. Mom wants a baby, son wants sex.

He is too young and inexperienced to know WHAT he wants long term. If mom wanted him to move to Mars and dress like a chicken he woukd...just to keep getting sex.

He has no business gathering a child with anyoy, let alone his mother who seems (otherwise) pretty intelligent.

Like I say, this about of suspension of disbelief is fine in a silly story with cardboard characters (horney high school girl decided to have dad's baby, or son impersonating every woman in the family...mom, sisters, cousins, granny) but I'm a serious story you need more reality unless the entire point of the story is mom waking up one day with a baby who's father is still in school and chasing younger women and realizing she's messed up and realized she used her son basically as a sperm donor in a midlife crises -induced pregnancy.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 3 years ago

So far a great series. As for the characters, the author's development of their emotional, sexual and sensual growth is very good. To summarize this chapter, the saying "The truth shall set you free" is very appropriate. 5 stars.

MorbidromanticMorbidromanticalmost 2 years ago

I didn't like it because of the characters. At least for now I don't like them because they seem so selfish... I look for love stories, not lust ones, and right now there's only lust, not love.

jcus0511jcus0511over 1 year ago

Fabulous story well written.

Holistic_VoyeurHolistic_Voyeurabout 1 year ago

The was one of the most beautifully well written stories I've ever read.

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Jan 15, 2024: big thank you to everyone who sent encouraging messages. I’m working on my next chapter.

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