All Comments on 'Sam and Jordan'

dont give up the day job.?

It was okay. It was cute, but to lovey lovely. It sounded more like a dream , rather then the present. Slow down the next time and try to imigine what you read. like was real.

It was good, a bit short but then again you did say it was your first story. I hope you're going to do a flashback, I would love to see how they got together! Other than the length, I have no complaints - it was very well written and a nice introduction to a romance story.