by caprine
Great story line, well developed and thought out. Would love to see a follow up ie: when Nik comes to visit.
Very well written and a complete joy to read. Sincerly hope for future installments to this story. The characters are so much fun. Again thanks for a grat addition to our favorite web site.
I don't know how anyone could improve on what you wrote. I usually am disappointed in most submissions because they're hard to follow due to ambiguous construction, improper words and misspellings. They detract from the story. I saw none of that in this story or it's lead-in story (which I looked up and read first). I'll have to check out the rest of your offerings. Thanks; great work.