All Comments on 'Samantha Under the Swing (Expanded)'

i think i know what the writer wanted to do - but hard to follow. i thought the concept was ok - but the only sex scene was confusing (at least to me) and too short. but a good effort for a first time writer on the site. i'd like to see more.

I liked it :)

"The noise from my wife covered any sounds Samantha might have made as Samantha stealthily disappeared from the room."