by Trionyx
I remember that movie. It was a long time ago that it came out. I thought the whole biker thing was unnecessary. I kept waiting for them to show back up in the story. Glad they didn't. Thought it was a good scene when they found out that they had hid behind the bikers house though. Really liked the ending when the RV showed up.
Overall I liked your story. Well written I thought.
J
I've been meandering through your work product. As I've mentioned elsewhere, you are showing a high level of mastery in both your craft (writing) and your art (literature). You care about your characters and about your readers. Thank you.
Hot. Great build up. Don’t know how they could keep that hot or a love affair quiet. Excellent.