All Comments on 'Samhain Sacrifice'

I liked the premise but couldn't empathise with either character. Nor were the sex scenes enough to save the story. Was a bit flat to be honest.

Thanks for the feedback. I was kind of trying to do a deconstruction of damsel and distress tropes which is why I made the characters unsympathetic like that.

Wow. That was a great story. Ik what Fer did was fucked up but I was really rooting for him and her. I also liked the end, she took his body and his name. Lol. Ig you gotta do what you gotta do! Great job