All Comments on 'Sam's Story'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
unique

i have read about things from a TV/TG POV, but never from a trannie chaser's POV.

a bit run-on, and the paragraphs need breaking up to make it more readable. and a bit too much past tense, a present tense version would have been more lively.

but a good attempt and bonus for uniqueness.

rfm1rfm1almost 19 years ago
Your story is GREAT!

I loved the story and it is truly very hot. Please keep writing, you have what it takes, I would read everything you will write.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Wonderful

That is an amazing story. Please continue writing you will have a fan in me.

rfm1rfm1almost 19 years ago
Hot Story!

The story is on fire I love irt, keep writing..

rfm1rfm1almost 19 years ago
Great Story

I think the story excells and loved it. Sounds like you are part of the mix. What a way to be, can't wait to get there..

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Pretty good

Pretty good. But who the fuck is Toni?

sassysuetvsassysuetvover 9 years ago
Hot story

This was a hot story and unusual in being told from the female's point of view.

SuzieCrossSuzieCrossover 1 year ago

Love the story wish I had a girlfriend like that, what fun we could have.😊

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