All Comments on 'Samson and Delilah'

There is a place where the text is redundant.

Hi, Ogg, here from the ND contest. This was a sweet story and the size difference and the tenderness between Huw and Myfanwy made it even more special. Loved the closing line, too, with a very nice tie-in to the Biblical story. Great job and good luck in the contest.

P.S. As the other commenter mentioned, there are two paragraphs where the text basically repeats the previous two; see the ND thread for specifics.

I have to say you have THE most unique story lines. Loved this one and wouldn't mind a follow up...

Very nice concept. Two redundant paragraphs and one or two typo prevent a 5. Well done with nudity not leading to instantaneous sex and NO mention of SIZE.

Inventive story that should keep the attention of sports fans and dance fans because it doesn't belittle either one.

I so wanted to say I loved it but the misspellings and the goofy words stopped me from it.

Differently told but nice

Now edited to remove redundant text and other corrections were made.

2nd edit has made a few amendments.