All Comments on 'Sanctuary Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
As Always -Attraction and Desire Well Defined

I Always looove reading your writings. Characters and their emotions are so well developed. I am speechless at your talent for capturing the rawness of human emotion. Emotion that takes the intimate encounters far over the edge, off the page and make them Real for the reader.

Thank you for sharing ALL your passionate writings, poetry included. I have not commented before, but your writings have definitely comforted me in the absence of the true love as I await her presence to become real in my life. Thank you again!! Please continue this story as well as E&J. By the way, Happy New Year!! - Mochaluvn72

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
TRUELY PHENOMENAL

LOVED IT AS MUCH AS THE 1ST ONE

WAITING FOR PART 3

WHAT CAN I SAY YOUR STORIES ARE JUST SO ADDICTING

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Hmmm

It's hard to express in english let's try in french :

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Comme d'habitude des personnages réels, complexes, qui doutent, désirent, se retiennent...<br>

Qui s'abandonnent finalement.<br>

Une histoire qui tiend debout et n'est pas juste un prétexte.<br>

Tout ce que j'aime.<br>

Merci.

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J'attends la suite avec impatience.

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Now, let's try a translation :

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As usual, your characters are real, complex, they doubt, they desire, but they restrain themselves...<br>

They also give in eventually.<br>

The story is realistic, and is not only a pretext.<br>

Everything I like.<br>

Thanks.<br>

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I'm waiting for the next chapter now.<br>

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Nessa.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyabout 2 years ago

Unfortunately cheating betrayal is a humans DNA part and with pandoras box, the www, we opened up millions of possibilities ....... Just a natural event happened every moment around the globe

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