by bigpreggoman
Dude you need serious help! Pronto! Don't stop to collect two hundred go straigt to seek help! Gave you a whopping 1
Miss Silver766
It is certainly not bad, if one does not like the subject it does not mean it is horrible. So 5 stars to compensate for that Silver person :-)
Find out more about real life before writing more fiction.
most of the people might not agree with the subject....part 2 was really kinky erotica ...i could feel characters intimacy and hunger upon each other....u are cool man...write more fetish stories.....alex@india
I love huge pregnancy and so does my girlfreind she and i NEED more of stuff like this. wish it were a guy and a girl but beggars cant be choosers
Disgusting. Total turn off. And i'm a lesbian so that's not why. Just the way you described everything is just gross.
I was really turned on until we got to the scat play but otherwise, totally got me off.