by Mackie2006
Usually done by im-mature males. Judging by the story content the presumption is correct.
I usually try to find something rewarding in all stories.
Sadly that along with constructive critiscism is missing here.
Along with a point to this story.
Why did you actually waste your time,our time & web space with this story????
was it to practise ?
If so you really need the practise
so, in that sense, this may be one of the most real stories here.
If that was your purpose congratulations! Worst. Story. Ever.
I must be weird. I actually liked this sad little story. When I was growing up in London I knew somebody very similar to your heroin. Her real name was Bernadette ( a good Catholic girl), however, she was better known as Bernie the Bike). All my mates including me fucked her. I think it was her way of finding affection. Sometimes a story hits home and this one did.