All Comments on 'Sandy'

The story was ok. Obviously it had better continue, otherwise it doesn't belong in this category. The "but": leave out the ALL CAPS. Let the reader emphasize what the reader wants to emphasize. I didn't understand why you did all caps on the words you did, and it was most distracting.

Why would an 18 & 19 yr old "child" (as you described them) need a babysitter???

wrong category....

It was great!, Just waiting for chapter 2. It did have mention of some previous incest with Sandy and her brothers, but I would say it better get onto some Amber/JJ action by chapter 3 or it should bein another category. It was still great!

I liked the CAPS as it was a different touch - so more CAPS please and and in next chapter we see the INCEST SIDE of this I am guessing - a THREE/SOME. Very good and keep them cumming.!

He's been trained, now let him show the females in his family that he's a man. Bed down sis, make her a slut to his cock, and then work on mom. Mom probably needs a good fuck and a steady lover any way. Thanks for the good story....Rich

Well done!