All Comments on 'Sandy Tobias'

Surely not. The very least we are due an explanation.

A lousy writer and a piece of crap story about supposedly some swinging action that he has no idea about. As a murder mystery story it is even worse, A badly written disjointed story that does not deserve even the 1 rating I gave it.

interesting story line.. I read 12 pages for it to die off sigh where the end

the story goes around and around but the pony doesn't move. Not worth reading.

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No idea why Dennis and/or Tony killed Sandy in the first place. On the surface they had nothing to gain. It appears that you had a story with no ending and grabbed the first thing that came to mind.

but what was with the Brandi character and you never said why the wife was murdered. You left a few ends dangling. Over all not a bad read.

you never tied it all together

Have to agree that the ending just didn't work right, because we never really found out why Tanya was killed. There is a theory, but nothing concrete and the story seemed to need that issue tied up to make sense of it all. We also never found out if the trips to Lansing were really at the employers request, or was something that Tanya cooked up because she wanted to start stripping again. Or, did Tanya start stripping because she was bored while in Lansing?

Needs to be tied together. Good start though.

I still think there is someone else involved, possibly Brandi. Smart college girl looking for a shortcut??? It would be nice to get another chapter just to see. Thank you for writing.

I liked the premise, but the mystery of who killed Sandy/Tanya was never explained. Also, the reasons for Tanya's double life were never explained. The beginnings of a good murder mystery were there, but it all fell apart.