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by Tall78701

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SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfire8 months ago

Hi, Tall,

Congrats on this new story. It was a sweet romance (even if it was in EC), with a bit of mystery and a touch of the supernatural (or maybe IBM's secret prototype Selectric-mail?). I really liked how Dean and Ellen initially got together and their initial time together; they seemed like such a sweet and very likeable couple. The typewriter part was a bit spooky (making me check to see if this was an Amorous Goods entry) but was given a good backstory even if it was left unexplained. You did a great job tying everything else up and leaving me hoping for bright and happy future for them. Excellent work and a 5* effort.

Crusader235Crusader2358 months ago

Great story with just enough scifi to keep it very interesting. Five stars.

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12/4/2023 Our next story is scheduled to be released today. Reading a letter to Dear Abby in last week’s paper inspired our most recent submission. The letter delt with a wife writing Dear Abby wanting to know if it was normal for her husband to “please himself” on a daily b...