All Comments on 'Santa 04'

English not your 'native' language?

If it is not then that would explain a great deal.

If it is then you need to get someone to teach you a little procedure called 'punctuation'!

'Punctuation' is what makes words in a string into a readable sentence, and a collection of sentences into a readable story!

Sorry, but I had such trouble working out what you were on about that I gave up after just a few of what, I presume' you intended to be sentences!

1*

Methinks anonymous doth protest too much. This story reminds me of Sam. Sam reminds me of stories by A.E. Van Vogt. High praise indeed. 5 stars.

I was kinda expecting John to go 'Ho! Ho! Ho!' as an ending.

But this ending is much better.

Merry belated Christmas!

May Rebarr guide your hand,

-Rebel

Nice story!

A good Christmas story , full of imagination. Thank you. AAAAA+++++

Thank you. Enjoyed this very much.