All Comments on 'Santa's Elf'

Thank you for this wonderful story, it was beautifully done, and a pleasure to read. Merry Christmas to you.

this is the first time I have been on this site, this was the first story I read and I really enjoyed it a lot.

Enjoyable story!

5

A absolutely beautiful and romantic story, deflnitely one to be read and enjoyed. More of this ilk would not go amiss.

Just went with my family last weekend. And fun story too. Mabsls describes me too.,

Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.🤶🤶🤶🤶🤶

Merry Christmas!

Dear Author, Lovely story. Thank you, jntiques/john

Definitely a 5.

Maybe it is just the romantic in me but it would be so wonderful to see more stories involving true love.

... but I loved this and found it so loving and so moving. Cannot believe you crammed so much into 2 pages. Just checked it is 2 pages.

A wonderful writing style that carried you on and through it so effortlessly. 5 stars deformation.

Cute story, but (considering the name of this website) not very erotic. Early hints, such as how they check each other out, suggest they are going to enjoy being physical with each other, in detail. But all they do is “explore each other’s bodies” or “make love.”

Great story, but the romance was just a bit too quick at the beginning, even for a love-at-first-sight type romance.

Even if the physical and emotional aspects developed that quickly, I would expect them to treat it much more as "we'll see how it goes", even if each of them was sure, just out of respect for the possibility that the other person's feelings might not last.

Damn, you did well for just a 2 page story. At least they got to spend a little over forty years together loving each other and sharing life. Score? 5 BIG ASS FUCKING FLAMING NOVA STARS!

2nd read. 5 stars this time round.