by nikki_bleu
Thank's anonymous for your insightful comment. It was so helpful.
I really liked your story and looking forward to your next one. Now come sit on Santa's lap one more time young lady.
I liked the story, I really did, but surely it is writen by a male!
A kids Mother is a MILF? Why would a girl call a Mother a MILF? Apart from the fact it actually a derogitary term, no female I know would refer to another femal as a MILF!
That aside it doesn't even fit into the story, you really should have left that whole bit out.