All Comments on 'Sara and Her Family Ch. 01'

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Need rest of story to make mind up

why is the mother giving brother a quick suck,while he's sleeping before she heads out to work ?

and then sister suck him off cause she feels sorry for him, Really Really

Story dosen't make much sense at moment but

hopefully all will be all explained in next chapter/s which are coming ASAP i hope

To mediocre Tom, because this story is utter pish!

Give the brother a generous pubic bush, and maybe a good dusting of hair between his pecs -- and then give your readers a description as Sara goes down on her brother! Some high school seniors are very mature for their age and have hair on the chests already.

Good storyline with some hot sex. Thanks for sharing looking forward to part 2.

I hope mom and dad get involved with both of their children, perhaps double teaming the two women after their affair gets started.

Thanks for the read

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Other than her brother's cock being 7" long and Sara's pussy being shaved, we have no idea what these people look like. They are called adjectives! Use them liberally!! I could have done without the peeing into his mouth as well.

I would have probably started the story from the night before when the daughter returned home from school and maybe talked a little more about the family dynamic before I had her waking up finding her mother. This seemed like the beginning of an 80s porn film.

Make chapter two you are a great writer

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

What surprised cum next.

Good start. I found it a bit amazing thay neither brother nor sister had any reservations about there sexual experience. One of the two might have questioned the possible after affects.