All Comments on 'Sara Elizabeth'

This is one of the best written submittals on Literotica. The storyline flowed smoothly, the dialog and descriptions aroused me as the reader. Unfortunately, there doesn't seem to be a need for any additional chapters. I am making a note of your name so that I can keep a lookout for future submittals.

I HAVE TO AGREE WITH GRAYGE37'S COMMENTS. MY ONLY DIFFERENCE IS THAT I HOPE YOU WILL WRITE MORE FOR THIS STORY, ALTHOUGH I DO N OT KNOW HOW YOU IMPROVE ON IT.SO GOOD LUCK AND THANKS

I have to agree with previous comments.

Can you continue this story?

Thanks Don

Appreciate the kind words from all, especially grayge37 for the editing comments. I was my own editor/proofreader, and honestly I see I missed one. It's been a learning process; never depend on spellcheck!

But you are all very kind, and hope you enjoy my previous postings as well.

CT

Hot story!+++ Hoping for a sequel.

We're you lucky to have been with Sara more than once? If so are you planning on telling us about it?

And sensuously told. I do like your style, as well as your name, Mr. Clintorres.

~ M

Good story. Most guys have a fantasy of making it with a friends mother....Would enjoy more parts.

This author is the master of the romantic/erotic love story, as this story shows. These stories are not common on the site, so a void is truly being filled with stories such as this one. The problem is that the author writes far too few stories. Five stars.

Hope you pen a follow up story.