by bogey102
Wonderful story... You share so much of Sarah with us before ever getting to the sex. This entire story should be a primer to those people (guys, usually!) who write bad lesbian stories. It made me wet, wet, wet!
A nice read. I particularly enjoyed the build of the encounter. Well done!
The play of the emotions combined with the sex works very nicely. The characters come across as people not sex toys. Keep it up.
A really strong sexy story with an excellent build up to the big finale. I will definitely be keeping an eye out for future stories written by you. :)
I love your stories and writing it refreshing after all the gandbang revenge stuff of most of the stories. Will there be a sequel to either of them? I hope so your characters are very realistic and wonderful
I loved the story, loved the characters, but it was spoilt knowing there was and never will be a chance to meet them again. I was so wet, more so than with any story in a while.