by SarahInTexas
I really liked the pace of development and the authentic relationship between mother and son leading up to a really hot final scene.
You randomly went back between past and present tense. Pick a tense and stick with it.
Great First story. Looking forward to more chapters
I can't remember the last mom-son story that didn't have them have sexual intercourse in the first installment.
Very hot but would have liked to see some fucking thrown in there to make it a little longer.
Enjoying the story and build. Shame to mess that up rushing at the end and treating her like a common slut.
Great job as first time story submission! Very erotic and didn’t mind how the Mom wanted to be treated by her son as a cum slut! Actually makes sense to give him a blowjob before giving her whole body to him. Please write more and continue to explore how the Mom is feeling, engaging in these most taboo feelings, it’s naughty as fuck!