All Comments on 'Sarah's Birthday'

Hoping there is going to be more. I enjoyed the preparation, but there is a lot more to tell, more of her father, and also her mother. I will be looking forward to chapter 2

I gave a review in the New Story Reviews in the Author's Hangout of the Lit Forums. A promising debut, but needs an editor.

Very nice start. I'll be looking for future chapters!!!

Very hot! Looking forward to the continuation of the story.

Oh you devil..you know just how to tease .It was very nicely done and the second and third parts will be enjoyed by all . Thank you .

really great birthday pressie

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Great story... A shame there was no sequel. How about it?