All Comments on 'Sarah's Joy'

I came over to read this story and give it a 5 just for the scene where the sub cuffs the dominant. But I read the first page, and then the second, and then kept going. This was a very well written and fun. Well done, you! My only gripe is with the capitalization applied to the dominant (Him versus him). But that's my peeve and I'm not going to criticize you for using a standard widely accepted in the BDSM writing community.