All Comments on 'Sara's Panties'

All of the fine comments you have received are certainly

justified. Well written and engrossing. This is the first story of yours that I have read. I am a fan of yours now

I totally enjoyed the beginning mid-middle and end. Perhaps a little too much teasing inbetween. There is nothing like a good build up which you wrote so WELL!!!! And the romantic and interconnectivity of his past and present were EXCELLENT!!! Still, I dont know what, I am no writer - something or an opportunity was missed?? Yes, please continue writing - with the agony, pain and obvious desire they both have for each other can be explored furthered. Perhaps someone else entering their lifes, interfering with their desires will add another to the peak story. Oh well, there goes my 2 cents.

Really wanderfull! The way the story grows is fantastic... I really enjoyed the way the releshonship between father and daughter evolves slowly but inesorably into something stronger... they both wanted it, and they both feared it and tried to stay away from each other, but eventually (with the help (always...) of some wine) it all went as it should... mmm... I think that they should have sex... possibly that same night, later. They ahve to cross definitly that line...

You are a great writer you must.. not should MUST! make this story continue!

This is without a doubt one of the best erotic reads I have had in a very long time...... Great Job youbadboy......

Luved your story!

It was a situation I could relate to, becuase of a daughter that grew up with her mother and really would like to spend some time with me. I had a girlfriend for awhile with teenage daughters. They were always teasin and wearing panties and short tops or bras around the house. I walked around in a constant state of arousal. We were playing cards on the bed and one of them was curious and touched me while the other was in the bathroom. What a wicked grin she had. And the older one used to ask me for backrubs on the sofa when she had cramps at night. Her back extended quite a ways before she would clear her throat.

Great memories brought alive by your story.

Really would have liked an optional ending with her not able to walk away. When reading stories, it would be nice to break from reality where it doesn't happen to happily ever after fairy tale for fun. Again, not like reality at end.

Oh well, just my take.

Never stop, 2 good to stop.

Aloha,

JS

So Hot - Keep it up! You certainly kept me up.

That's all that needs to be said, it's HOT.

That is a wonderful story. With heartfelt sorrow, romance and loads of eroticism. Write more!

Absolutely Wonderful story. Please keep them coming..

The perfect blend of intellectualism with raw, animal force. You're patient enough to let it all happen at the ideal pace, not too fast, not too slow, just these two individuals spiraling into each other despite -- and at the same because of -- their best intentions. I feel like I myself just came in Sara's wonderful red mouth.

More, I implore you! You must! We must *HAVE* Sara, completely...she must speak the words "Do whatever you want to me", and mean them, and finally yield to them!

This story was really awesome! Please continue with this series as it is one of the best erotic stories I have read for a long time. Not to continue would do all of us readers an injustice :-)

Love all your stories. This may be your best. Love the long build up as it is what would happen in real life. There are no romances or incest real life situations where two people look at each other and fall into fuck heaven. All start with small touches that build up to two or more people sharing an erotic experence.

Keep writing I love a good story and a good read.

Thank you.

Your style captures eroticism at its best, with longing and lust and much more. Your descriptions are elegant and sensual. Please continue this fabulous saga!

Wow, loved it! I would really like to see you continue with the story. Probably the best I've read in a long time.

This is deffinetley the best erotic story i have ever read. i have shared this one with 3 friends and they all loved it too. keep up the GREAT work!!!!

You don't particularly need any more rave reviews for this fabulous piece of erotica - but it's good to see that it appeals to a variety of folks. The frission was superb though and I think it made us all look at our own sexuality in a new way. The tension was exquisite.

Keep on writing.

This is an incredible piece of erotic literature. In fact it is the best story I've ever read on Literotica. You are a master storyteller. I can't imagine that you could add more to the story...this should be the end...and yet...I want to know more. Thank you for sharing this masterful story with us.

Gave me a great feeling & an erection!

I love this man, he knows just how close to take you to the edge and holds you there, so when you finally do fall it is sooooo worth it.

Welcome back!

so real, so beautiful, so drawn out..... the dynamics the whole works. A truly superb piece of writing

I was thrilled and massivly turned on through the entire story, I had a hard time holding off so I would finish myself and the story at the same time.

This is the greatest story I have ever read. I even had my girlfriend who is a published author read it and she agrees that its the best work of art ever found on this site. Keep up the good work.

I usually don't like father/daughter stories, but this one was wonderful. Youbadboy, you are the best!! I read the story twice and got more out of it the second time.... I almost hope there won't be a "Part Two". This work is so great that anything else would be anticlimatic. The 100 degrees on the thermometer is in Celsius!!

youbadboy are an amazing poet and writer and need to take this story to the next level. I think i u know what 3 times during that story...I have been thinking about that with my daughter(i massage her,watch her sleep,laundry,see her in her intimates, but would never think of sleeping with her).BRAVO 100% please continue this story it gets me off in ways that i wish i could do myself

I think I'm falling in love with youbadboy:)

I'm sticking to my seat!

Wow!! What sensual heat you have generated with Sara and Dad. It took me 3 sittings to finally get to read all the story, and I couldn't wait to come back to it. Very excellent work. My face is flushed, my breathing is rapid, and my fingers...sticky. Please tell me there's more.

I normally don't read incest stories, bu t a comment from someone intrigue me. What a wonderful, sensual story. Please continue....

please,please,please continue the story

I couldn't stop reading. I was defintely under your spell. Very well defined characters Write more about them or not. It should be as you please, youbadboy. Thanks for making me miss that meeting. I didn't really want to go anyway.... So what if I called the damn thing, y'know?

man, all I can say is WOW!... If you don't bring on the next part of the story, you're in deep shit......

You need to take this too the next level.This is the second hottest story I have ever read.

one hell of a hot story, can't wait until he slams the hot cock to the sexy little bitch, you know she wants it

"youbadboy" is a truly unique talent. please take good care of him. i have read everything he has written for literotica and they are of a uniform high quality. his easy naturalness must come from a lot of hard work. Or is he simply gifted that way? in any case, a wonderfully gifted story-teller!

one of the hottest incest stories i've ever read....and he hasn't even fucked her yet....wow

Incredibly well written - the teasing is just spot on. It had me going (coming?!) right up to the end. Just hope this wasn't really the end, tho.

damn i got to hear the ending to that! one of the best ive read, and to the girl who said she was so wet she had to change her panties, will u marry me :P

I?ve read all of your other stories and you just keep getting better. This story is so hot I can?t wait to read the next part. I was giving up masturbation for Lent, but your story has changed my mind. (Don?t worry I should have thought of something more realistic anyway!) Please don?t keep us waiting long.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

To have Sarah !!!!!!!

really good - please complete, they have to have sex!- if others think it is best left like that, they don't have to read the next installment(s)!!

Please continue the story. I gave you a 5. Please more teasing, Sara handing her panties to her dad and watch him sniff and she wrinkled her nose and ask" Is it stinky dad? Or Sara doing sit ups and Dad pressing his face on sara's crotch inhaling her musk. Or Sara wakes her dad by putting her open pussy near his nose and he inhaled her musky pussy and woke up and smiling she says "time to wake up dad" and she runs and dad chase her around the house until he caught her up in the living room floor and ended up getting fucked. And much more sniffing with detailed talkes about the smell and both gets flushed face and a bit embarrass at what's happening.

My god! I was struck with pure desire to finish this story!

What entertainment! My minds eye has never been so full!

beautiful writing! The descriptions painted the pictures perfectly! This story is HOT! I hope to see the consumation story soon! I would like the experimenting, or testing of the waters so to speak continue to a point to finally for her to let him have intercourse with her and to bring her to an ultimate climax as to which she will never say no to again! He must find a way to free her innhibitions and let herself go.....to finally climax which she has yet to let herself do. Her dad has seen what one story can do, the next one has got to be better even if it's made up with her essance/simularities injected into the story so she will finally "give in". God I can't wait!

I was so aroused that I had to change my panties before I could leave the house. My God! I'm stil wet.

What an exciting story..never intended to read it all today....but I couldn't stop.....i guess if you are going to be late for work it should be for a good reason..please please continue despite the story being so complete now.

I can't wait till next part. so hot and sexy.

Whooeey!! Talk about hot.. This one pops the top on the old sensual thermometer. I'd love to hear more of this couple. Fun read.

Very sensitive and sensuous story. Lets have another installment where Sara finally gets fucked.

this is the best i have ever read

Fantastic story, certainly looking forward to further chapters. You really show the emotions of both daughter and Dad. Felt like I was there, seeing it happening first hand. Great writing, Thanks for the realism.

One of the best stories I have ever read :)

With your words you conveyed emotions that can only be felt with a physical touch. Keep up the fantastic writing...and please...please...don't keep us waiting very long to read about how Saras Father makes love to her.

I am truly wowed by this story. I honestly have to say that when I saw it was 6 Lit pages I groaned but I kept reading. I think the story was well thought out and planned. Please continue the story.

I must say, there are not a lot of stories told from a man's perspective that convey realistic female emotions. This one does. I was right there with Sarah the whole time. I agree with an earlier comment that maybe this story is best left as is...let the reader complete it in their mind.

absolutely wonderful story. the thing is though can you write a sequel as good, or is the story perhaps just better left as it is... with the uncertainty of what is to come. some things are better left untold...

Please dont keep us waiting for the rest of the story!!!!!

Really hot!

That was a great story....please continue!

Really great story. Awesome job.