All Comments on 'Sara's Panties'

Good story but you left us hanging there not knowing if they would continue their sexual exploitation

Wow! Amazing! So Hot! My wife told me that her dad would sniff her used panties. She was a university graduate living at home. There was a special bond between them. In her mid-twenties she would let him run his hands up and down her legs and squeeze her bottom. He would get erections and she would rub him until he shot off. She would rub her pussy up and down his cock and cream on it while he kissed and sucked her nipples. Sometimes he would slide his finger across her dark-haired pussy and rub her clit until she had wildly intense orgasms. She loved his masculine scent and he went crazy over her pussy scent. She drove me crazy telling me about this in order to be transparent before we married. When she saw that it aroused me and I did not think she was a slut, we hit it off.

Please give us more of these two! Would love another chapter!!

Six long pages of tedious angst - back and forth, back and forth to the point of becoming BORING without the slightest feeling of satisfaction or fulfillment! I'm surprised it was rated so high. Apparently there's people who enjoy this kind of unfulfilled angst.

While reading your story I found my daughters used panties and chewed them while jacking off

Should have fucked her !

Sara have to let her dad fuck her pussy,and complete her p.h.d .later they have to married each other but no kids just love making and happy live .

All that just for a BJ. Disappointing.

This is perhaps THE best father daughter story on literotica. Period. The long, slow seduction. And of course, the panties! Wow! I have never been more aroused in my life. That is one lucky Dad! I so wish I was him! All your stories, OMG! You NEED to write the sequel to this - a long tease again, until she finally lets her Daddy put his cock inside his daughter's pussy and fuck her brains out.

I thoroughly enjoyed that please continue the story

This is, without question, the very best "Panties Story" I have ever read, and I thank you both for myself, and for all the other panty fetishist readers that find it. Your story comes from another era, years back, when things were far less complicated, and story ideas were fresh and original. the story reads like fine poetry, it moves along gently and carefully, and it is a joy to read. Thanx once again for one of the Great Reads of all time!

Loved the story and I loved that she didn't let Dad inside. They did everything else but have sex and it was intoxicating. She had much more strength, just like a woman - men are too easy no matter how hard we try not to be - but then she went almost all the way...just held back that little bit. She obviously wanted to have his cock up inside of her but was troubled about going that distance. However, she did ask him if he wanted to fuck her....did she bring herself to orgasm once in bed, using his reply of "yes" as the magic potion...not that she needed it. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter....don't wait too long!!!!

...and she finishes her doctorate paper on:

'How to give your father a stress induced heart attack and collect the insurance money.'

Lol.

I love the long slow seduction. Every page was ramping up from the previous one. The language, poetry, of your descriptions; the smell and color of your words drew me in deeper with every paragraph.

Thank you for sharing your writing talent.

Please continue this story.

I loved your story but so want to read about her fucking her daddy. I so want to read how daddy loved her puss and worshiped it every day and night. I want a love story of daddy and daughter. Please write another chapter. Let her give herself total to her daddy and he to her. PLEASE> BTW you made me cum three times while reading this part one I hope. vastie vastiesmith@gmail.com

Keep the story going with just the two of them becoming lovers and doing erotic things indoors and outdoors.. please do not introduce anyone else into their love!!!

Oh God! This is so good! You seriously should be writing books of erotica. Hot!

you have to cntinue this ending it there with her willing and wanting but still saying no and just leaving and going to bed. i think a chapter 2 is in order. they both want to go all the way but not totally sure on it yet. please continue this

One of the very best.

For the next instalment, my cock is screaming to say 'get in there and consumate' but my head says stretch it out. Maybe a sister cums to stay and they have to hold back? For a while anyway. Want more flashbacks.

The game is still causing a fire in dad's sack and he wants to feed his baby making cum into his daughters sperm catcher. Is there hope of such in this five star story?

Does dad have any, not sure of the right words, pride or self respect? Do the ends always justify the means? Having to always push and push to get what you want seems kind of desperate. I always enjoyed the chase, but to me, it never felt right if I couldn't turn the "prey" into the huntress. THAT was almost better than the sex! Knowing I could excite a girl to the point that she "had" to have ME was the ultimate turn on.

Fucking hot

Very sensuous and erotic story and well written

Argh!!! Thats it? You're killing me! Don't stop it There!!

I really loved it :). There were a few annoying things, over used words,

(If you never say 'tipping' again that would be great!) but none of it enough

To detract away from five stars :)

..,his college school story... With the raven haired woman... Fucking magnificent!! ...and mixing it in with playing with his daughter... Awesome!

...I think next time I'm fucking my wife nice and slow I'll tell her one of my naughty hookup stories about me and my FWB being naughty with her bf in bed right next to us! ;)

This is by far one of the best stories l have read on here, absolute spell bound, l was transported into the story, and was that dad.

so intimate, so sexual but without sex, so hot, so......

great writing as always, you truly are a bad boy!

This is an incredibly well written story. Full of tension, regret, indecision, guilt, excitement it works far better to hook and tease the reader. The psychological undercurrents are powerfully and masterfully developed. Certainly among the top five of all the best stories I have read on literotica.

I have read it multiple times and it works over an over again.

Superb Job !

read it in one go from start to finish, more please it was so hot.

Sometimes im after quick and easy story but the build up on this was exactly what i was after, so far the story is fantastic. More must be created.

dad is a test subject in a research study for her Doctoral Dissertation. She is just a bit to clinical in her questions and the limits to which she will go, and not go.

there again, if youbadboy won't write Chapter 02, it might be time to request the services of FTDS.

Can you please write a sequel to this? Please please please please pleaseplease please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please????

I loved this story and would never presume to tell you what direction to take Sara and her panties. Your descriptive prose was spell-binding. I will be reading more of your works, but must say this one set the bar high.

Thanks for sharing your imagination with us.

Of all the stories I've read this has the best psychological build of the most intense sexual tension ever.

Masterfully, it builds, little by little, and teases, and builds flames of desire, partly because it is so damn well written and also because there is genuine conflict in both of the characters about incest.

Incredibly GREAT.

Thank you, thank you.

Absolutely stunning, All i can really say is Wow.

You let us travel into a landscaoe of blissful experience touched with reverential sensation, You have the gift.

This is probably one of the top 5 stories ever on Literotica. The tease of the Dad, as well as the reader is just incredible well delivered with tantalizing, gorgeous detail of Sara's beautiful body. Hence, for me, it works and because it is so deliciously slow, the desire builds, and builds, and just builds to a body wrenching climax of sorts. The progress of the teasing interplay between them is really something. He is ashamed of his desires, yet he just about cannot (or will not) resist the tempting flesh of his daughter. She tempts him and yet she too is conflicted with her own desires and the need to say, no to his constant advances, and breaches of his promises. Yet she parades her body in front of him, to tempt him and watch his fumbling attempts to hide his feelings.

The writing is wonderful and even (somewhat) believable because it seem so real. The interplay is complex and the gradual loosening of the social inhibitions against incestuous behaviors is slow enough to be credible. I found myself at times not wanting her to give in, and for him not to break his promises and the bonds of parenthood, yet I could feel and taste their desire for the forbidden.

I'm very glad that at the end of this story she said no to full intercourse, even though he was begging for it, because this kept the tension and left the tension in place. There is still somewhere to go in a future story, and of course it made the story more believable too.

If I could I would give this story a 10 !

Thanks so much -you really are Badboy, but a truly gifted one.

The ONLY problem I had with this story was that I had just read one of your other Sara stories and was expecting a brother/sister continuing story. It took me almost a full page to do a brain shift to a new Sara. I look forward to the next part of the story.

As an older man with a daughter (who is currently estranged because of family confusions) this story has great significance.

Maybe before you continue the actual story we could have a discussion of some possible developments.

Some good sex between the two of them would be nice, along with them discussing what they mean to each other. By all means let Sara get over the ambivalence about sex and sensuality. She is already so close to perfect. What a treat for any lover, her father or anyone, to share that development. And what a gift she would then be for her next lover.

Maybe some three way sharing would be in order?

One woman lover of mine was determined to encourage her father to express his lust for her. She was fully certain that he wanted her, but the usual programming was causing confusions. I don't know if they actually made love, since I lost touch with her, since I was still too immature to realize what a treasure she was, or to rise to the occasion. The father, whom I met, was a little off-putting to me. Would have been interesting to have kept on with the involvement.

Your story so far has just about avoided cliche and triviality very well. It could go either way depending on how real you decide to make it. As erotica it is very good, better than most by far, but it would be great to see you take it all the way real.

Unbelievable!!! And as ironic as it sounds...absolutely believable! So many incest stories in Literotica are just kind of out there in the plausability meter, but I felt this happening before me in a perfectly acceptable situation. As for a sequel? I think this should be left as is. The next story, if you decide there is one, should just leave the panties behind except as a recalled moment and move on to another perfectly believable scenario in a father/daughter relationship. Great work. Fabulous storytelling. I couldn't put it down! Oh yes, I was erect from page one...whew!

This is one of the best ever, realy !!! which could'n stand as is ! Please, after what Sara has asked her father: "would you really fuck me if I let you", you must go on and tell us how this is going to happen !!!

I am a 22 yr old female an a great orgasm to this. Thanks so much for the beautiful erotic story it really made my night!!!

You have a great story and then you dont finish it, what is with you. Why did you not continue the story. It would also be nice if you used different names so we would not confuse this Sara story with the other ones.

I enjoyed they storyline of it, felt it could have used a little more development though, and you need to fix your grammar and punctuation too. But overall I thought it was very well written despite the speech kind of being all over the place. You need to fix that, because I'm not even sure whether he's talking at times.

I liked the evolution and the detail. I also felt the pain.

In some ways I found the story to be true as a description of how many people view sexuality, of how many of us develop our ways of acting sexually in not always the most nourishing ways, of how we can in fact get caught up in more a taking from another rather than a giving. I thus finished the story with a sense of sadness of the pain so many of us feel and wonder if our society will ever come to a realization of the immense beauty and joy of sexuality and pass this attitude onto to our youth so that they will own their sexuality and know when to give and when to receive and how to share in a most beautiful way. Thanks for writing a story very real and lived too often.

You did a great job. I really enjoyed the story and the way you presented it. WOW, you had me very excited.

Keep it up ... continue the story.

I agree, Its so good. Please continue!!!!!

wow i just spent a good 45 minutes reading this story thinking wow does he finally get her?? Then you say Ha ha story over.. What a raw deall,. For that the rating gets a zero

please please finish this amazing story!

Why didn't you finish this story? Will you? I know a lot of years have gone by since you wrote it and you got involved writing other stories, but there should be a conclusion to this story I think.

True erotica - soft , lyrical and oozing

This was one of those stories where I kept asking, "Will they or won't they?" The ending wasn't exactly what I'd expected, but then, that's what made the story unique. I enjoyed it. Keep writing!

Exceptionally well written. I was drawn to the characters and the relationship. Please continue the evolution.

erotic, sweet.

Dude.. That was flippin amazing man... I love the amount of detail you use... Keep up the good work *high five*

You kept me enthralled from start to finish. I could picture the scenario with almost real thoughts. Keep writing

The inclusion of background along with current evolution of the story is excellent. The struggles of real people make your stories not only erotic but near-genuine. Keep it up.

Can Sara ever say Yes?

You can't leave us in suspense...come on lets have the rest.....pleaseeeeee

Not trying to be vulgar here but you just gave me the best body shaking orgasm. The tension you managed to build so many times was amazing, thank you, xXx

What a great story and so very well written..Hope to read more at a later date!!

so good and fun to read.

That was absolutely amazing.

Uhmmmmmmm, worked for me! Thanks.

captured my attention and kept it through the whole story!

thank you so much for writing this!

fuckin hell that was amazing please do keep writing!!!

your storys get better and better......

You are the best erotic story writer that I have ever read! Continue with the panties, but don't let her give in too easily!

Very well thought out and openly visualised it all !!!.

gave it 100 then remembered what crossed my mind reading chapter #3: "this is soooo stretched out" only worth 50 for that reason.

I echo others in saying that your writing is a joy to read; the building tension, the pace, the suggested actions embedded among the obvious ones. The psyhological tension between the characters works very well, and can be developed; this story could develop light bondage themes; teasing and taking turns at seducing each other; how far will she go? How much bolder can he be? When will a point of surrender occur? It will be in the telling and building up of these themes that your readers will, again, be satisfied. More, more I say, more!

Same as everybody else.

This was far better than most offerings on Literotica and is a guide to the way erotic literature should be written. I particularly loved the "tale inside the tale" where he relates to Sara his adventures with Laura - this is an example of where other authors can learn from a master! Well done!

Fabulously written, but am a little disturbed that they are so closely related

As always from youbadboy, a wonderful, thoughtful, teasing story with hugely believable characters and a beautifully paced development. Like everyone else, I can't wait for a second instalment of Sara and her panties!

There is no doubt that you are one of the very best erotic storytellers around, certainly on Literotica. I wouldn't dream of trying to influence your style, but I may run the risk of putting some people's back up by suggesting that your stories could do with a little more careful editing. In "Sara's Panties" I found misspellings, missing apostrophes, faulty capitalization, bad punctuation, incomplete sentences, confusion between homonyms...

It's no worse (in fact, much better) in this respect than most offerings on Literotica, but nevertheless it does detract just a fraction from what is otherwise an almost perfect literary masterpiece.

oh...my...god...

That was so....well, no words can describe the way I could see what was happening in your story...everyone needs a bad boy who can write like this. Very impressive.

You're the best writer ever!!!

Keep going

I reckon this is one of, if not the best erotic story i've ever read.

Loved the way you tease the readers, by giving us the slow enjoyment of your fantasy. Keep writing and keep on teasing.

Wow

This was hot! The teasing was incredible.

Well done by a man who knows HOW to write!

If I could just catch my breath for moment...

This IS the perfect erotic story. It does exactly what it is supposed to do, make one feel hot and sexy. If you have anymore in you to write please do it, you have the knack for it. Excellent!

very good, erotic and arousing.

I was enthralled by this particular story.You should be doing this for a living.

I think this story is hawt !

very nice.. it would be nice if it had a femdom twist to it ..hehe

I really enjoyed this one. Very good, you have a really good style.

Incredible story the way sex should be a real tease from start to finish..U have the gift my friend.

Continue with the story. I loved the teasing and would like to read more.

You have the art of the verbal tease down to a T. This is the way erotic literature should be written ... none of that "Wham! Bam! Thank you, Mam!" stuff one sees in most fiction of this sort. I was pretty sure throughout the story that you were a woman, because you know how to hold back, to tease, to make the reader use his/her imagination rather than bludgeon us with crude descriptions that are the antithesis of sensuality. Congratulations on a great story.

the best i have read so far when do we get the next bit have you wrote anything else

Usually I don't go for long stories, especially if the sex is tepid. But this story kept drawing me in, like a moth to a flame. Even when I got to the end, I didn't feel disappointed because the writer wants to carry on with this story. Drag it out if you will, have him eat her pussy and smell her panties (that smell gets me going, too).

It sounded real, plausable...so ultimately highly erotic...the best on the site...

Awsome I forgot that it was a man and his Daughter by the end of it, I was so involved in the story I could smell it. Its so good it was indecent. My Thanks for this work.

Just like good sex. You teased and teased and teased me, and finally you gave me release when you allowed them to engage in overt sexual behavior (yes, with the help of the wine). It was an absolutely wonderful and perfectly-timed buildup. I agree with the folks who say DON'T write any more of this. It came to a great conclusion. But if you do...I'll be watching for it and enjoying it. :-)

This is one ,if not the most well written pieces of work that I have ever read. You kept my interest through the whole story. It was fantastic. Hope to see more in the near future. Will also be reading other stories that you have written.

Thanks!!

This is one ,if not the most well written pieces of work that I have ever read. You kept my interest through the whole story. It was fantastic. Hope to see more in the near future. Will also be reading other stories that you have written.

Thanks!!

You need to continue sharing your gift of erotic prose with the rest of us.

perfect ending to the story. enough to be nice but yet not too much. you left your audience wanting more... never finish the story lol.

I can not wait for the next and next and next chapters. This story of "Sara's Panties" is spell binding. Does he get to or does she? There must be an answer and the author must take us there. Please continue and make it as warm and with heart felt feelings of desire once more. Thank for being the author and thank you for sharing this erotic story.

I can not wait for the next and next and next chapters. This story of "Sara's Panties" is spell binding. Does he get to or does she? There must be an answer and the author must take us there. Please continue and make it as warm and with heart felt feelings of desire once more. Thank for being the author and thank you for sharing this erotic story.

that was the most errotic story i ever read just beautiful.