All Comments on 'Sasha's Daddy'

I know there has to be more to this story? why did you stop? just when it was getting good you ended it like this

VERY nice 1st post

I would like to thank coygirl for editing my work.

Also yes, this is just the part 1 of the story. I'm a fan of stories with slow build up. This one in particularly is meant to be just that. So look forward to next chapter. Hopefully soon.

What a nice start of daddy and daughter getting " close " watching scary movies , this story could very easily happen for real between any male and female combination. Looking forward to hearing how their scary movie watching goes in the near future .

...reading past the first paragraph. When the third line reads: "I was walked towards the kitchen wearing a simple cargo pant..." I'm not going to risk brain cells by continuing on!

Can't wait to read more, teasing start.

SECOND PART IS UP.

Thanks for all the love, support and constructive criticism you showed towards 'Sasha's Daddy'. I've worked hard on the second part, to make it better, and I sincerely hope I did. So enjoy the second part of this series. It is named 'Sasha and Daddy'.

Grammar: the difference between knowing your shit and knowing you're shit.